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RP Starter: La Pathetique by VintageInkling RP Starter: La Pathetique by VintageInkling
His eyes drooped lowly, focusing on the dim lit streets of Vintage City as the street lamps flickered on and off...on and off...a pattern that seemed sporadic to others but to him..it was all of the same monotonous bullshit...After all, He would walk the asphalt every single night, not a break for him as heavy bags lined underneath tan dingy looking fur.  The clicks of his shoes echoed in the darkness, not a sound besides his was heard, not even the buzzing could drown out those faint sounds of heel..meeting cement. A self-wrapped cigarette rested upon pink lips, puffs of smoke being blown out through his nose every so often...He was so exhausted that he had forgotten all about the blunt, now just humming to himself...

You see this Feline, nothing but a lanky silhouette in the dead of night coming your way...A pathetic man who held no value..or so he though...Do you approach him? After 4 more steps...he began to topple over.



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{{ I did this without an initial sketch. which was super fun. Feedback is appreciated >w< }}
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percabethgirl Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
casually uses brand new OC))

The french feline walked through the dim city, looking for the person her boss had instructed her to find. Well, he hadn't quite told her to, but she knew that if she didn't do this, she would be fired, or killed. Her long, blondish tail whipped around, clashing slightly with her dark attire. She laid a dainty hand on the gun under her dress, -just a small bulge now- making sure it was there, just for comfort. She smelled the familiar scent of cigarettes, and she saw a tall, lanky figure. She ignored it for a second, before she saw his tail and ears. She slunk to the shadows, her bright eyes narrowing slightly. She she inspected him, and realized he wasn't the man she was looking for. She pursed her lips, contemplating her options. Her claws sheathed and unsheathed, over and over again, on their own accord.
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The thin man was wobbling with each step, struggling to hold his own as she suddenly heard a sickening crack. He had fell over, head hitting the asphalt harshly as blood began to seep out of the rather large gash, now visible due to his scruffy fur...it never head much on the account of any injuries he had sustained. He was now just some shadowed figure, laying on the side walk for her to gawk at.
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percabethgirl Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She sighed, before muttering to herself; "I'm such a softy..." She said, her thick accent obscuring her words slightly. She darted out into the sidewalk, before kneeling down next to him, feeling for a pulse on his neck, making sure her claws were completely sheathed. Her tail whisked around, slightly off of the ground. The lights suddenly dimmed, and her tail twitched, then resumed swaying.  She tore a strip of her black shirt off, putting in under his head, letting the blood seep into it.
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She saw that this did not stop the constant flow, obviously his skull had been cracked rather badly, the bone even visible as it pierced his scalp, showing itself through his grody fur. Pierre let out a weakened huff, his eyes shutting tighter as he whimpered, the sudden movement causing sparks of pain to course through his body.
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percabethgirl Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She sighed, wrapping the strip of clothing around his head, where it had opened. She then shifted him, picking him up. She heard his whimper, cooing softly to comfort him. She knocked harshly on a door in the alleyway, yelping slightly when it opened quickly behind her. She darted in, speaking disapprovingly at the unknown person. "Ze man I 'ave here could 'ave been killed, are you stupid?" She scoffed, then gently placed him on a nearby bed. Her tail thrashed frantically about, hitting the wall, creating a low thumping sound.
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His face seemed to scrunch together, the scent of his own blood filling the air was rather unpleasant to him, his small pink nose twitching lightly. "Nnng..." Was all he could make out, coughing again as he involuntarily spat out a few of his sharpened but now broken teeth, tinged with the colour of decaying crimson.  Blood now seeped from the side of his maw, staining him more so as fingers would twitch and his agony would cause sharp pains to run up his very spine. Green eyes shot open as he let out a terrible Yowl, his broken tail trying to move but only making him tear as the ache of his body turned into heated torture.
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percabethgirl Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The sudden action made her hiss, her tail frizzing up and her claws involuntary unsheathing. She then calmed down, and pushed him softly back on to the bed. "Calm down monsieur." She said. "I'm trying to 'elp you here, bud."  She grabbed a slightly damp cloth and started dabbing at his fur, the white rag quickly turning a reddish pink.  Her green eyes darted around, looking for something else to help stop the blood-flow from his head.
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He began to sob, the sting of the wash cloth touching him was enough to drive him over the edge, overworking himself and passing out finally, leaving her to deal with his mangled form as he curled up against the smaller feline.
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SuperSamZero Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice work :)
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Devikel Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gale had decided to take a late night walk while Felix was still away at work. She strolls down the quiet street but stops when she sees a shadowed figure approaching. She squints to try and see who it is, noticing the long tail and broad ears. "Felix?" She walks a little closer just as he starts to topple over. She gasps and rushes forward and grabs his shoulders just in time to stop his head from hitting the pavement. She frowns as she looks at him, seeing that he clearly wasn't Felix. 
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